Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Jasmine has a crony, Miley.


Jasmine- who is always alone- has no friend. She sat down speechless in her desk, waiting for math class to start. The bell echoed through the hallway and Mrs. Newsbom( Her math teacher) stepped in. But behind er, was a new girl. Her hair was bright yellow, with blue sparkly eyes.
"This is Miley, she is from the U.S.A and she will be joining us in math." Mrs. Newsbom exclaimed.
" Hi! I'm Miley, and I hope I get along with you guys. I am watching out for the people without friends because that is what I really hate to see. Okay? So please don't show me friendless people at the first day of school." Miley retorted in a loud and clear voice. There was a big applause. She found an empty spot right next to Jasmine.
" Hi! Do you mind if I sit here?" Asked Miley politely. Jasmine was flustered.
" No, you can sit here" Jasmine replied.
She saw Miley on most of the class, and surprisingly she sat with her in every class. But she doesn't know that their friendship is growing bigger every second.
Miley- who confront the people who spreads bad rumors about Jasmine- makes her feel special, makes her feel as if she have found a friend she was searching for years. Aspires to be a principle of a school she dreams of. Jasmine realized that Miley hasn't just been friends with her, but that she didn't want to make Jasmine feel the pain of being bullied. Miley, who seems so popular enough by her look, was bullied since 5 th grade. But has learned to be brave and never give up. Jasmine's life was turned upside down when she found out.
There camaraderie intensified. And in there heart, there is a small seed growing, a seed that connects their bonds strong like the Great Canyon. Always Miley would whisper in her breathe,
" People that is addicted to bulling need to change their behavior towards other people." And there you see something glowing in their hearts. ' Friendship'.

3 comments:

  1. Great Story!! You have a few spelling errors but apart from that Great Job!! I love it!

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  2. Yes I know. I corrected the spellings.

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  3. Great job Yeji! I loved the conventions and description you put into the story! I noticed one typo: you put er insted of her. :))

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