On January 3rd, 2010, at 10pm in South Korea, President Lee Myeong Park was in his car, when gun shots were heard. It was attacking the black car the president was in, and finally it stopped, and the victims disappeared. Thankfully President Lee Myeong Park was not injured, but he and the people who were in the car was in
anarchy. Though the victims has escaped, through the CC T.V camera, the police were able to determine who they were. They were a
conspiracy of Korean officers.
The police is trying to figure out why the Korean officers had tried to kill the Korean President, but they don't know why. Nobody knows until the police apprehends the victims and ask them why.
good use of the words! short but good! :)
ReplyDeleteReally good! Sounds like mine jiji I like it :D keep it up :D
ReplyDeleteGreat story, but he wasn't injured? haha I don't like our current president...He sucks. He is definitely not a good president. Great use of words and the only improvement would be to make it a bit longer :)
ReplyDeleteGreat job! It sounds like a newspaper article, I think it would be a good idea to make the headline a date, to make sound more journalist like:).
ReplyDeletegood story but dont you mean the suspects or criminal instead of suspects
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