Sunday, November 15, 2009

3 Word Wednesday=Weakness equals revenge

For Tory, 2 friends to trust on is adequate for her.
Rebeca, her worst enemy-who administers everyone- sometimes agitates Tory. Derogatory rumors would be spread to people to people like virus. But Tory, who can explode with anger, never capitulate, she has her 2 best buddies- Carla and Emma.
Tory rushed through the crowds of people in the hallway, trying to make her way to her locker. By the time she reached there, she is aghast. With big red letters, the note said: "YOU ARE SUCH A LOSER!" She could feel the anger rising up in her head, but she pushes it down. She tried to rub it with her finger but unfortunately it was written with a permanent ink. The letter is familiar as she tried going deeper into her mind. Rebeca! It's her!
Rebeca- who is indifferent to other problems but goes crazy when her nails aren't even- has a face as the rose but mouth as sharp as a chainsaws.
Tory snaps herself from pondering as she rapidly sprints to English class before she gets tardy. The bell rings right after her right foot steps in the classroom rug. The class starts, no one talking just pencils dancing aroung the paper. 3 table infront of her, there she is, the demon, Rebeca.
It is memoir monday and she toiled on the desk, reading a book named " Friends, enemies". She is urgent to finish the book. Mrs. Newsbom, her english teacher, checks on the students every 15 minutes.
"Rebeca! Wednesday isn't spelled wedsday! You are in 7th grade and you have to know those basic spellings. Try not to use the kingdargarten words you know. Use some S.A.T words dear." Mrs. Newsbom cried out loud.
"Sorry, I just don't know those hard words. I don't liked them" I heared her whisper. They both started talking, and I stopped reading and my ears listened carefully. Mrs. Newsbom needed to teach illiterate Rebeca how to read also. That was her weakness. All what I've struggled to know and find out. She has a weakness, everyone does, but it is now heared, and Tory knows what to do, revenge.
Today the rain brought a welcome respit from the tremendous heat. It was cool and so isTory's mind. It is lunchtime and she desided to eat as much as she want. She got loads of food in her plate and headed off to a table where Emma and Carla was. They were eating citrus. Their normal conversation started, nothing happening. Suddenly, Rebeca and her gangs comes walking towards their direction.
"OH MY GOD!!!who on earth would eat like you?I mean I don't care you turn into a pig but at least..."
" Would you buz off?" Tory disrupted Rebeca's talk.
" Yea, and mind your own buisness!" Carla added. Rebeca's evil eyes stares, her mouth not budging.
" Urgh! What a loser!" she says, annoyed.
" Look who's talking. Hey you know what? Would you please stop acting so boor to people and acting like an asinine? I mean in this time go home and study some S.A.T words!!!!!! It is a strenuous work but you would have a better life after that. Or do u want to have a menial job and live in a hovel? It's your choice." Tory purposly shouted it out loud so that others could hear. The lunch room was quiet. Carla and Emma claped, others follow. Rebeca- the one who's cheek's are now red as blood- wonders and wonders, what Tory had just said. Is running out of the lunch room, down the stairs never looking back, and doesn't come tomorrow and the next day and forever...
Tory, who sometimes can be shy, but is brave if she is, won the fight for the first time. Her heart can't stop bouncing up and down, the smile of hers doesn't leave her face.
By: Yeji

1 comment:

  1. Beautifully written.

    Please see me with a printed copy in your writer's challenge notebook so that we can make some minor changes and you can edit your post.

    Thanks!
    Mrs. Brown

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